Footsteps they never going to find me. The morepork is singing. In the background the light is right next to me I roll into a mini valley. The light is. On the tree I catch the eye of a possum I croch. The wind feels like the wind is forcing me back I keep going I hear footsteps the light I crawl away from the light. Dam I feel like I’m in a Michael bay movie the light spots some one I run I get found.
Friday 5 August 2016
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Great work Kade
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ReplyDeleteI loved the language and ideas you have used in this piece of work
ReplyDeletehi sonny here I like the explaining in your video.
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hi Archie here nice intro Kade next step write a little bit more about when you were escaping.
ReplyDeleteHello Kade I like how you described about the Michael Bay movie and all about the morpork but I reckon you could work on your spelling.
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