Friday, 5 August 2016

spotlight

Footsteps  they never going to find me. The morepork is singing. In the background the light is right next to me I roll into a mini valley. The light is. On the tree I catch the eye of a possum I croch. The wind feels like the wind is forcing me back I keep going I hear footsteps the light I crawl away from the light. Dam I feel like I’m in  a Michael bay movie   the light spots some one I run I get found.

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  2. I loved the language and ideas you have used in this piece of work

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  3. hi sonny here I like the explaining in your video.

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  4. hi Archie here nice intro Kade next step write a little bit more about when you were escaping.

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