Thursday 23 June 2016

the roar

Sneaking in the bush like Ninjas roaring the stag roars back to as we hear trotting dad gets the 6 point 5 off his back i put my hands over my ears boom a big stag is lying on the ground by Kade
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  1. Anonymous28 June 2016 at 11:48

    Hi Kade nice poem I like the bit about the ninjas. Maybe put some full stops in there. But good poem. And check out my blog at http:/
    /paroagreysonnyh.blogspot.co.nz/

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